Unwashed Village

General Discussion => Unwashed Village => Topic started by: Alderach on December 13, 2007, 04:24:01 AM

Title: Heyo, it's a thread!
Post by: Alderach on December 13, 2007, 04:24:01 AM

Within wich two poems may be found.

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Grasshopper

There is a variety of grasshopper that
always frightens me
For from a well mannered, simple creature
spawns a hulk monstrosity

When mere seven years of draught have passed
and all the land is withered
of goes shell, and out from slumber
twice the size, with bloodlust

.. springs evil wings and lethal claws
not to mention never ceasing hunger
I speak of cource of natures plague
ravaging as LOCUST

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Incandescent

and through the future your eyes sparkle incandescent
widen in loves gaze
juxtaposed to present
wherein gloom i graze

long i stumble, frought of heart
in ever present multitudes of mindset.
but hark thee the goal i've set
of "twinflame"; love souldeep.

push for morrow
though i may, nervous fruitlessly endevour
akin to fool, to jester, prince
set my mind forever

and on that path so rightly beaten
stumble forth i shall
vigilant, mindful, weary
longingly until

the way made clear
the veil then shattered,
as only truth may do
whereupon a swing i shall
spend eternity with you

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Hello.

- Alderach

Title: Re: Heyo, it's a thread!
Post by: Tank on December 14, 2007, 10:33:01 AM

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Title: Re: Heyo, it's a thread!
Post by: Night Owl on December 15, 2007, 12:02:52 AM

The UV's all-world artist returns.  :guitarist:

Nice poems, Alderach.

Title: Re: Heyo, it's a thread!
Post by: Bubonic on December 15, 2007, 05:57:04 AM

Sounds like someone has caught your eye Aldy.  :)

Very good work.  Your poetry really has matured over the years. Mine has just evaporated (I hardly ever write any more).

Exceptional read.  Thanks for sharing!